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Not entirely sure I'm done with this, but was looking for some feedback. Entirely vector, from an idea I have for an anime-ish looking wing. Somehow thinking of Subaru from .hack...
Critiques/opinions welcome... may or may not scrap this in favor of a more finished version, if I can figure out how I want to "finish" it.
Edit: Still not sure I'm done with it, but I like this version better...
Thanks to ~la-stephen for [link] which helped clean up the design in my head so I could do the same here.
Sorry about the spammage. Really obsessing over this right now... Stopping
Critiques/opinions welcome... may or may not scrap this in favor of a more finished version, if I can figure out how I want to "finish" it.
Edit: Still not sure I'm done with it, but I like this version better...
Thanks to ~la-stephen for [link] which helped clean up the design in my head so I could do the same here.
Sorry about the spammage. Really obsessing over this right now... Stopping
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Originality Technique ImpactWow..this is very nicely done. And from such looking at it for a few seconds, I can see that you have succeeded at giving it a very anime look.
I like the choice of the color black in this, as it gives a very mysterious feel to it. The highlights on the end are also superbly done, and they contribute to giving it a very polished and shiny look.
My suggestions? Well, since it is still a WIP, so I cant think of much but I think that adding reflections of the atmosphere (where this wing is) on the black portion of the wing will greatly improve it's appearance of shininess and realism. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="
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